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ive actually much to say in the name of god all impure soals of the living dead shall be banished into eternal damnation amen
but now i realize that there are humans as evil as any devil as well as kind of compationate deamon in this universe at least i found one so called devil whos able to shut tears 4 those who he cares about thats enough 4 me to believe in him
keep smiling it makes ppl wonder wht ur up to
giving in is wht kills ppl when u refuse to surendor with all ur heart only then u transend ur humanety even in the face of death never give up
and conclude with a poem ive made myself my heart is broken my tears refuse to be shed im drove by the inability to forgive them my soal is screaming demanding me to kill them to top it off that corpse over their lying lifless,full of sorrow,emtyness and true dispare that only is the reflection of my living body my blood is bleeding but i cant stop breathing i must rise in the darkness but not to light maybe in somewhere less dark maybe in somewhere less dispare maybe in that bloody path right under my frozen legs an i was livin all that time without air waiting for someone to care at leasr it is true that man has no control even over his own well but is that fair??!! is it true??! or else can it be baired??!!!





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3 years, 7 months ago
Nice poem, but I don't see many images there. No doubt you'll get better :)
Here's an example of an awesome poem by Kim Addonizio:
** First Kiss**
Afterwards you had that drunk, drugged look my daughter used to get, when she had let go of my nipple, her mouth gone slack and her eyes turned vague and filmy, as though behind them the milk was rising up to fill her whole head, that would loll on the small white stalk of her neck so I would have to hold her closer, amazed at the sheer power of satiety, which was nothing like the needing to be fed, the wild flailing and crying until she fastened herself to me and made the seal tight between us, and sucked, drawing the liquid down and out of my body; no, this was the crowning moment, this giving of herself, knowing she could show me how helpless she was—that’s what I saw, that night when you pulled your mouth from mine and leaned back against a chain-link fence, in front of a burned-out church: a man who was going to be that vulnerable, that easy and impossible to hurt.
Lots of images there. :D Aim to be as good as her!